Tuesday, February 11, 2020

Outline of first ten pages

Pages 1-2: setup of lake scene; teacher and student are struggling; they argue; flashback starts of when they first met

Pages 3-4: setup in testing hall; students arrive, including the student, followed by the teacher's; the student sits in the front row working on a crossword puzzle; the teacher sees her, narrows her eyes and whispers to colleagues; teacher watches student the whole time and the student is the first to finish

Pages 5-6: setup in hallway; teacher finds student waiting for oral exam and asks to talk to her; she tells her she can't take the program though she's already paid for it; student demands answers, teacher gets angry and, when student doesn't back down, tells her everything will be okay and that she'll be in her class

Pages 7-8: setup in office; plaque shows teacher is director; she goes into computer system and changes student's last name, finds her test results, looks at them which shows she belongs in a lower level class, then rips apart the paper before throwing it away; she adds the student to her class which is a higher level class, with a smirk on her face

Pages 9-10: setup in classroom; student corrects teacher; they argue; other students defend teacher; student shows in book what the information says; teacher insults student; student leaves and slams the door; teacher smirks and continues lesson

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Outline of first ten pages

Pages 1-2: setup of lake scene; teacher and student are struggling; they argue; flashback starts of when they first met Pages 3-4: setu...