Pages 1-2: setup of lake scene; teacher and student are
struggling; they argue; flashback starts of when they first met
Pages 3-4: setup in testing hall; students arrive, including the
student, followed by the teacher's; the student sits in the front row
working on a crossword puzzle; the teacher sees her, narrows her eyes
and whispers to colleagues; teacher watches student the whole time and
the student is the first to finish
Pages 5-6: setup in hallway; teacher finds student waiting for oral exam
and asks to talk to her; she tells her she can't take the program
though she's already paid for it; student demands answers, teacher gets
angry and, when student doesn't back down, tells her everything will be
okay and that she'll be in her class
Pages 7-8: setup in office; plaque shows teacher is director; she goes
into computer system and changes student's last name, finds her test
results, looks at them which shows she belongs in a lower level class,
then rips apart the paper before throwing it away; she adds the student
to her class which is a higher level class, with a smirk on her face
Pages 9-10: setup in classroom; student corrects teacher; they argue;
other students defend teacher; student shows in book what the
information says; teacher insults student; student leaves and slams the
door; teacher smirks and continues lesson
I'm writing this screenplay for a workshop. By the end of it, I will have completed a script of 110 pages. Each new post is the assignment I'm submitting for review. This will be interesting for anyone who wants to understand what's involved with writing scripts. Only time will tell if someone decides to produce my script.
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Outline of first ten pages
Pages 1-2: setup of lake scene; teacher and student are struggling; they argue; flashback starts of when they first met Pages 3-4: setu...
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Act One will start with a snippet of the final confrontation with the teacher and the student, then shift to how the teacher came to be ho...
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Pages 1-2: setup of lake scene; teacher and student are struggling; they argue; flashback starts of when they first met Pages 3-4: setu...
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There are two main characters: the teacher and the student Teacher: Because of her mild Down's syndrome, she has drooping eyes and ...
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